一点自己希望记录在案的东西。与其他任何人都并无关联。而且。没什么好看：（
若日后终有所成，风光无限之时，也要永远记得曾经亦经历这般的艰辛委屈，记得梦想也曾被视若无物的搁浅，记得万事要在时间尚且充裕之时早做准备，记得当断则断切忌优柔拖沓，记得有些事情尽早就该毫不含糊的说清楚不留隐忧后患，记得成绩不是万能的但没有成绩是万万不能的，在有能力赢得证明之时就该竭尽全力。
若日后当真得已站在UK的土地上，无论顶礼膜拜，抑或睥睨万物，都要记得今日诸多辛苦周折，百转千回的坎坷辛酸，深夜时无措心伤的辗转难眠。记得要在另一片土地上永远捍卫自己的梦想而不再任其为人践踏。
Dear officer,
I am very thankful to you for taking your time during the busy work to read my letter.
My name is Tianshu Wang(DOB 07/10/85),I am Chinese.Now I still study in Harbin Institute of Techonology for the last year.I delivered my materials to the University of Bath in the end of last OCT.And this morning,I receive the rejection from your university.I am really really depressed.
Before I made the decision to apply this university,I had read the entry requirement carefully to make sure I can reach them.But,unfortunately,I am still confused.
I know my GPA maybe lower than the other applicants.I do not wanna exonerate for my scores.But since I prepared to study aboard,I've already realised that the scores are one of the most important parts of your judgment,the IELTS scores,the scores I've got in my university.All of the scores always can strongly prove one's ability. They are visitable to jugde a student.So,this term I study harder than before,till now ,I get about 90 or above of all the 6 courses we've finished.I dare say that I will get the students' award again this term.
I know it seems a little late to prove something.But I also want to let you know.Maybe you will reconsider about my application.To contrast,if I even do not have a try,it is undoubtedly that I have already totally lost my chance to have courses in Bath,which university I've admired for quite long time.
Basically,I do not write to doubt your decision or something.This is real not my purpose.Also,I don't want to acquire your sympathism .I hope I will not leave you an expression that I am begging for something.All I am doing now is having one more try.I don't wanna lose any a little or tiny chance to join this university.Because I know it means a lot to me.And I indeed would like to study accounting&finance in Bath.
Definitely,I've noticed that Bath is one of the top-grade universities,that is also why I'd like to choose this university for my further study.So I know the competition is fierce.I also understand that every decision you've made is through carefully thinking.But I do hope you can consider me again,please.
I still remember my IELTS examination,after the speaking test,the old examiner asked me which university I would choose for my further study? I said,definitely Bath. Then he told me that I made a wise decision,and Bath was considered to be a very good university.I was so excited to hear that from an English man.
I've been anticipating to go to Bath for a quite a long time. So,when I get the rejecting letter today,you can image how depressed I am. It feels terrible when I ever think that I have no chance to study in Bath.It likes a long beautiful dream break out suddently.I could't find any university else which I prefer more than Bath in UK.
If you do think my IELTS 6.5 is not high enough and doubt about my English level,I'd prefer take another IELTS examination the next month.Instead of that,I also like to take four or eight weeks for language study.
The university which I still study in is the top 9 of China,I can study well if I try my best. And I indeed got several awards during the past terms. So I can promise that I have the ability to achieve my study not only in China in Harbin Institute of Technology,but also in UK,in the University of Bath.I do believe that I can manage the study in your university and be a excellent student,if I have the fortunate chance to be admitted.
Would you please give me an opportunity to consider me again?
I'm very sorry to bother you,I know all of you in the international office are very busy now.If i don't consider it is very urgent and necessory,i won't burden your work now.That's very kind of you to read my letter.I request for your rethinking,please.Thanks a lot.
sincerely,
Yours, Tianshu Wang
